Show Don’t Tell!!!!!!!!!!
I have had it with these PEOPLE!!I stormed out of the playground I looked angry I had purple under my eyes.I had my hands on my hips ,my lips bucked.
Why does everyone hurt me.I screamed my head off and then sprinted to the teacher.How is this fare to me!! I slammed the door as I left.I cry and scream the whole way to the doctors my foot was broken. I screamed as a shock of pain swam throughout my blood.My face went purple I was going to faint.NO!!Darling wake up!! 
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Well done I like the layout of this post. Can't wait to see more show don't tell posts from you as they are very discriptive.
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